Return of Mare-Do-Well

Rainbow Dash discovers that there is a pony in Ponyville who claims that she is Mare-Do-Well, even wearing the same costume. When Rainbow Dash discovers that it isn't her friends again, they try to find out who this mysterious mare is and figure out why she's playing Mare-Do-Well. Rainbow Dash is made to look bland in comparison, and with the Wonderbolts hearing about her defeat and consider retiring her after accusing her of jealousy, Rainbow Dash gets concerned that this might cost her her dream. Things get even worse when this Mare-Do-Well is revealed to be like Rainbow Dash was during the Mare-Do-Well incident: doing heroic deeds for fame and fortune. When Rainbow Dash's attempts to prove this end up with her being framed for the long disappearance of Mare-Do-Well herself, she is kicked out of the Wonderbolts for good. With Rainbow Dash leaving Ponyville in response, Twilight and her friends bring it upon themselves to discover the truth behind this Mare-Do-Well. Then they discover that Mare-Do-Well is actually a very powerful unicorn named Onyx Luck, who was once rescued by one of the Mane Six as Mare-Do-Well, and when she discovered that Mare-Do-Well has been gone since the Mare-Do-Well Celebration and was last seen being chased by Rainbow Dash, she immediately comes to the conclusion that Rainbow Dash was so jealous, she did something horrible to Mare-Do-Well. She then left before she could discover that Mare-Do-Well was just a means to teach the unwilling-to-listen-to-reason Rainbow Dash a lesson through experience to get the power to take the identity of Mare-Do-Well, rescue the original, and punish Rainbow Dash for her crime, all while gaining fame and fortune along the way. When the truth is revealed to Onyx, she becomes so guilty, she tries to take it upon herself to find Rainbow Dash and apologize. But when she finally finds her, things will not be pleasant as Rainbow Dash is still bitterly angry due to the loss of her job, even when Onyx tries to tell her that she simply got the wrong idea because she was lied to by someone who 'once idolized her'. After fighting each other, they discover that this liar is known as Mare-do-Wrong, who, after watching Rainbow Dash commit horrible deed after horrible deed and is surprised that everyone just forgave her, she decided to take it upon herself to have Rainbow Dash pay, simply by tricking Onyx into being an unknowing pawn to her scheme. With a greater and more powerful threat in the form of her in the works, and since she is capable of mind-controlling the ENTIRE Wonderbolt team AND Reserves, it's up to the Lougers and Gazelle to show Wrong that she can't expect heroes to be unfaultingly perfect and that she isn't being any better ruining her life and brainwashing the Wonderbolts into being even bigger idiots then what Brony critics had called them, along with misleading a poor mare into helping ruin a hero's credability and is a highly punishable offence by the high council, which is actselly worse then Rainbow's moments of inferiority by compairison.

Material

Songs/Music/Videos

(Running Gag Between Onyx and Rainbow)

Batman Has Zero F***s Robot Chicken Adult Swim

Scenes

Onyx Discovers Her Mistake

Mysterious House

• Onyx: (She came out of her Mare-do-Well costume)... WHEW! It took forever, but I did it! Rainbow Dash has been punished for the murder of Mare-Do-Well! I guess... It's about time I got rid of this suit.
• ???: (A door opened) MISS ONYX?!? CAN WE TALK TO YOU?!?
• Onyx: I'LL BE DOWN IN A MIN- (They teleported in front of her) YAYE!!! (She fell head-first into her bed)... WHA... YOUR HIGHNESS!
• Twilight:... Onyx, we need to talk!
• Fluttershy: You should be ASHAMED of yourself! Why would you frame Rainbow Dash for all this mean stuff?
• Onyx: Well, isn't it obvious? She murdered my hero!
• Applejack: Hero, what're you talking about?
• Onyx: THE MYSTERIOUS MARE-DO-WELL, DUH!!! I was one of the ponies she rescued, and I LOVED her! I was there at the final celebration where Mare-do-Well herself was chased off by Rainbow Dash and never seen again! It was all too clear what she did given the tone she displayed! She murdered her out of jealousy. And given nopony knew about it, it was up to me to make sure she was rightfully punished. (The five looked at each other knowing the truth)
• Twilight:... Miss Onyx, you must understand!
• Onyx: You're HONESTLY going to stand up to that murderer?!? Why does she deserve any slack after-
• Twilight: Mare-do-Well was us.
• Onyx:... What?
• Twilight:... See... It's kind of a long story. See, Rainbow Dash was getting a bit of an ego hype after being a town hero. And we noticed she was soaking in too much attention.
• Applejack: So, we decided to teach her a lesson by posing as Mare-Do-Well, to ensure the people see her more as a person who does this for the fame and hype, and hopefully, so would she. And it worked. When she chased Mare-do-Well into that alley, that's when she discovered we were helping her.
• Onyx:... THAT HAS TO BE THE STUPIDEST PLAN I HAVE EVER HEARD! WHY THE F*** DIDN'T YOU JUST STRAIGHT UP TALK TO HER?!?
• Applejack: Would you HONESTLY expect her to listen?
• Pinkie: Yeah, did you even WATCH the episode reviews? Everyone kept arguing that talking to her wouldn't work because she was too full of herself to even listen to reason. So, we had to do it the best way she learns: by experiencing it.
• Twilight: You see, Rainbow Dash is a physical-learner. She is not good at paying attention. She does better by watching it in action. That's how we helped her get into an entrance exam to the Wonderbolt Reserves. Telling her our concerns would never work. She NEEDED to get a reality check, and that's what we gave her.
• Rarity: To put it bluntly, you were GRAVELY mistaken.
• Onyx:... I... I...
• Twilight: But we can't blame you for getting the wrong idea. But... Wait... The truth was revealed right afterward. You'd think you would've discovered it by now.
• Onyx: I left Ponyville afterward.
• Applejack:... Just to clarify, when were you rescued by Mare-do-Well?
• Onyx: When I was about to fall off a cliff on a carriage-
• Applejack: It was me.
• Onyx:... I...
• Twilight: Now then, tell us, what could've POSSIBLY convinced you that a pony who had saved Equestria COUNTLESS times, is VERY loyal to the princess, and is no doubt not flawless but positive-minded, would resort to cold-blooded murder? That had to be something a rotten bastard like Wind Rider would say.
• Fluttershy:... Or, rather, ANOTHER pony who hated her.
• All 4: What?
• Fluttershy: Think about it! It couldn't have been Wind Rider because, let's be honest, he wasn't the evil vengeful Pegasus he is now back then. It had to be somepony who... REALLY doesn't like her. Somepony, she failed.
• Onyx:... Now that you mention it.... I WAS offered a suggestion to just get payback, assume the role as Mare-do-Well, and get justice on Rainbow Dash.
• Twilight: And who suggested it?
• Onyx: Not sure, he sounded pretty legit, and he didn't show much of himself. I was at a convention when it happened. The one who told me was dressed up as Mare-do-Well. I couldn't make out his face, OR his cutie mark. But for some reason, he didn't sound like he was hiding something. Perhaps he was just trying to be helpful.
• Twilight:... I think this pony set you up to do this to Rainbow Dash. We HAVE to find him.
• Onyx: How?!? He could be ANYWHERE!
• Twilight: Simple. We just confront the Rainbow Dash Club about it. If ANYPONY knows Rainbow Dash AND the Mare-do-Well incident the best, it's them.
• Onyx:... So... All that, was just to teach her a lesson?
• Rarity: Yes. Sorry, darling.
• Onyx: (She covered her head in guilt)... I-I gotta contact her, apologize!
• Twilight: Oh, I'm sure she'd be glad to talk to you after you wrecked her life.
• Onyx: WELL, CELESTIA DAMMIT, I GOTTA DO SOMETHING! IT'S MY FAULT, AND I GOTTA END IT!

Transcript

Darkwing Duck Intro (English)

Intro/Climax Theme (Darkwing Duck Theme Song (Title changed to Mare-Do-Well)) Coming soon...